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At 7:13pm on January 29, 2012, Søren Baron Rom said…

A agree Kate. The possibility to book online is great, but to place it on the very first page before Lucien has presented her services/products seems a bit desperate to me. I would suggest to move the booking form to another place where it is more meaningfull for the user ("contact" for instance).

A question to you Lucien: Why do you write about yourself in 3th person at your CV ?

In my oppinion it is less personal and more awkward. If you don't get my point due to my poor school English :-) here is an example of what I mean directly from your website:

Use: My name is Lucien Atkins. I am a Financial Educator and Advisor to Sales Professionals

Instead of: Lucien Atkins is a Financial Educator and Advisor to Sales Professionals

Kind regards
Søren Baron Rom
BARON & COMPANY reklamebureau

At 9:43pm on January 7, 2012, Kate Rose said…

Hi Lucien, I just looked at your website.  I love that you have online booking right on the first page.  Great idea!

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